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Post by Dirt on Feb 21, 2008 13:10:25 GMT -5
so i realize that alot of people dont lke Naruto and honestly neither do i it pisses me off for alot of reasons so heres what im going to do im going to remake naruto with many of its original charecters add some and change up they way things are done alot of the jutsus will stay the same but others will be changed if you really like naruto and dont feel that anything should be changed i will reserve my judgement about you and suffice to say that you should not read this that was my disclaimer so i dont want any messages about how that doesnt hold up to the story or any bs at all about stuff unless its valid and not just because your prejudice against people who dont exactly like naruto
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Post by Dirt on Feb 21, 2008 19:54:15 GMT -5
Every one knows how the Naruto story started out and if you dont lets shorten it to say hes an outcast he passes the genin exam and then it goes from their so im skipping that part of the story its boring full of overexcited naruto jabber and it doesnt have enough to do with the story. THis section of the story begins in the village hidden in the mist the former home of Zabuza Momochi the rouge ninja. This is a time after he leaves and before he is hired to take out the bridge builder that naruto's squad is sent to protect. "Aisu..Aisu.. wait Aisu." Aisu turned toward the young girl running toward him she wore the typical tacvest of the chunin she sprinted through the village gate toward Aisu "Rein go inside the village." Rein stopped in here tracks about 10 feet away from Aisu her purple hair glistened with sweat and her eyes showed a shine of frustration and grief. "but Aisu I..I.." her eyes welled up with tears "Aisu?" he stared back at her defiantly. "I'm sorry but...I have to." Rein began to sob uncontrollably as Aisu turned and walked away. THe air suddenly became fridged Rein's tears began to freeze as they rolled down her cheeks her breath hung in the air a small icicle began to form in her hand it started to change and took the shape of a rose. This only increased her sobbing as her tears hit the ground in frozen droplets the air suddenly started to warm and the rose in her hands began to melt. Rein fell to the ground and cried uncontrollably.
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Post by Dirt on Feb 25, 2008 23:31:48 GMT -5
In the mist village not far from the gate Higure stood he watched his sister sob. Higure bowed his head and let out a long sigh. He jumped atop the roof of the building he was leaning against. Higure was average hight and build, but he was no average ninja. Higure was one of the greatest jounin the mist village had ever seen. He came from a well respected ninja family that had been in the mist village for generations. Higure wore baggy dark blue pants tucked into his tabi boots. His upper garb was loose and the same color as his pants under his top was a thin piece of body armor that was made of extremely hardened steel. inside his top was a host of weapons from shuriken, shuko, blinding powder, and many other weapons. on his belt hung Tatsuma the dragon's fang a legendary sword passed down his family line. Higure shook his head slowly he watched Rein slowly stand and walk toward the village. Higure turned and looked atop the roof of the building he was leaning against. "so how long have you been there." The shadows atop the bulding concealed a figure. "long enough. You want to go after him or at least follow him?" "if that's all right."
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