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Post by Sir Kiken on Oct 1, 2007 10:26:38 GMT -5
Here's a new one for whoever decides to post next. Remember to make a Participation post first(and you better actually post a continuation if you post a participation.By the way this post is going to be a long one. I'll try to make those after this one shorter.
A huge battle raged on. A single swordsman fighting off hundreds. His blade ran through an open spot on an armored opponent. His quickly pulled it out to perry the strike of another foe. They swarmed him but he fought on slaying them as fast as they could approach. He held the high ground on top of a high hill. He held a fierce resolve in his steely grey eyes. His crimson cape was torn and flowed behind him like his red headband that showed under his midnight hair. The swordman was young and strong. He let out violent battle cries at he tore through his enemies one by one. Suddenly they stopped approaching and stood still around him. All heavily armored with spears and red eyes glowing behind the slits in their helmets,"Prince Joru. Your Kingdom is destoryed. You have no home to return to. Your fighting is sensless," a soldier said, "Liars! The kingdom is not destroyed so long as it's king lives! And if you can't kill me there's no way you can kill my father!" the swordsman cried. "You mean him," a voice said smoothly from the ranks. A long haired man walked through the troops. He was unarmored. His eyes were red and his hair was a dark shade of blue. He wielded a longsword that was at least a foot longer than the prince's. In his left hand he held a head which he lifted into the air and threw at the prince's feet,"Long live King Joru, right Seral?" the man said. Seral looked down in horror at the severed head of his father. He readied his sword and charged at the man, "YOU BASTARD!!!" he cried. The man chuckled as Seral approached with his spikey hair trailing behind him. There was only a flash of blades and suddenly Seral hit the ground and rolled down the hill with a wound in his side. He looked up into the sky and groaned,"Father...I'm...so sorry." The blue haired man loomed over him, "Too bad child. You won't be seeing your pathetic father anytime soon" he said,"Take him. We have no specified instructions on how to deal with this boy so I want him treated like an ordinary prisoner. That is an order of Grand General Geris." he said,"I want him taken in at Mal(short "a") Island Prisoners Camp." Seral was taken away as the Joru castle burned in the distance.
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Post by Dirt on Oct 4, 2007 22:35:21 GMT -5
so im feelin better but just to warn u this post may appear to be a steamin pile of cat feces.
keito awoke, the grey prison ceiling stared back at him. "another day in this hell hole." keito thought outloud speaking to no one in particular. he rolled off his bed which was the top bunk of a bunk bed. Instead of hitting the floor he flipped his body in mid air and landed squarly on his feet. Keito looked at the empty bottom bunk. "I wonder what they did with shuujin? i bet hes dead, I know they said he was being transfered but im not certain thats true." shuujin and Keito were put into prison at the same time about three years ago they had been cell mates and looked out for each other and kept each other alive. "Stop talking to yourself Keito your new cell mate is here." the gaurd walked toward the cell. "you know the drill spread em time for a contraband check." the gaurd bound Keito's hands and feet then patted Keito down "allright your clean." the gaurd motioned to another guard who brought the new prisoner in it was Seral. Seral and Keito's eyes met Seral looked at Keito who had an unkempt appearance his hair ran past his shoulders and was matted and dirty his prison uniform was torn and dirty he had a five o'clock shadow and his eyes looked tired and listless. Keito looked back at Seral "if your wondering you dont really get to bathe or anything around here and we only get hair cuts every six months or so, not the nicest place. well welcome to a long chapter in your life. Welcom to Mal."
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Post by Sir Kiken on Oct 5, 2007 7:57:03 GMT -5
Awesome. I like the end you put on this post. Nice job! ;D
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Post by Sir Kiken on Oct 5, 2007 8:56:22 GMT -5
"Thanks for the welcome," Seral replied sarcasticly. The guard shoved him into the cell and locked the door behind him. Seral turned around and glared furiosly at the guard, "Don't bare your teeth at me boy! I'll break you in a second!" the guard shouted angrily. Seral stepped forward ready to reach through the bars and grab the guard by the collar and ram him into them. Keito stopped him by stretching his arm out across Seral's chest. Seral looked at him with a harsh glare. Keito shook his head. The guard laughed and walked away along with the one who had checked Keito. "It won't help you in the least friend. Beatin' up a guard only spawns more. It's impossible to kill them all. You'd die of old age first." he explained. He went over and pointed at the bottom bunk,"so this is your bed." It came time for the prisoners to eat. They were all marched to the mess hall. They were sat down one by one and their feet were shackled. A bowl with a gooey white mush was sat down before them. It had specks of black in it and what appeared to be green balls resembling peas. There were strange brown chunks in it as well and some yellowish oily juice that settled in the bowl and a hard assed biscuit thing that was more of a manmade rock than bread. It was even gray like one. Keito rubbed his hands together and began to crumple the rock up with little effort into the creamy goop that seemed like an attempt at mixing an item of every food group up into a bowl with vast amounts of radiation and some type of withcraft that made dried feces look like a biscuit/rock. Seral stared at the goop for a moment, "I think mine winked at me," he said disgusted. Keito had just put in a mouthfull of the "food" and burst out laughing which turned into a scream. He had tried to hold in the laugh and the hot goop had shot out of his nose burning and smelling horribly. The table erupted in laughter, minus one guy. The guy who had been sneezed on. He was around 300lbs of 99.2% muscle. He stoop up to his full 6'10" of height and banged on the table. The whole area stopped silent. "What the HELL was that!?" the man shouted at Keito who had just gotten all of the goop out of his nostrils. He seemed as if he was about to answer and suddenly shot under the table. Everyone heard a rapid jingling of chains and clicking. The large inmate looked under in time to see Keito throw off the shackles and scuttle from under the table. The inmate roared as he raised up from under the table just in time to take a full force punt style kick to the face from Keito. The man fell limp backward and lay draped over his seat unconscious. Keito jumped back into his seat from the table and shackled his feet again just as the guards rushed in. They looked on at the prisoners but did not see the limp inmate. About twenty of them stayed while the others went back to their posts. Keito went back to eating and Seral tried to crumple the biscuit into his mush at which point he noticed he couldn't. The lump was just too hard, "Let me help you there new guy." Keito offered taking the biscuit and crumpling it into Seral's food easily,"There you go" he said taking a big gulp of mush,"The key is to let go right past your tongue without touching it. That way you don't have to taste it. Seriously...you don't want to taste it. The first time I did, I starved myself for a month" Who the hell is this guy? Seral asked himself as he brought a plastic spoonfull of mush into his mouth. The moment it touched his tongue he gagged hard.
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Post by Dirt on Oct 5, 2007 10:06:12 GMT -5
ha sounds like my old schools cafateria food.
It was yard time now and Seral looked about seeing that yard time was merely walking around in shackles in the prison yard there was really no exercise and almost nothing to do. There were weight benches and dumbells scattered about the yard which was surrounded by a 35 foot fence with sniper towers placed at 10 yard intervals. He scanned the towers each was occupied by at least 2 snipers some had three it seemed each prisoner had at least one riffle trained on them at all times. As if that wasnt enough there were gaurds posted in the yard to oversee the yard time activities. damn they really dont want anyone getting out. Seral thought Keito walked up behind Seral almost silently. "there hasnt been an escape in over 40 years they really bulked up on security after the last one and they made sure it was the last one." Seral looked at Keito in astonishment. "everone thinks about escaping there first day dont look so shocked" Keito said with a large grin. Just as Keito finished his sentence a large man who was around the same size as the man from earlier but seemed even bulkier stepped into the yard with four gaurds on either side. "KEITO!" he shouted just before he charged knocking guards down and out of his way Keito didnt seem to pay him any attention he merely looked at Seral and with a sly grin said "could you move please." the huge man charged at Keito who was only about 5'9 give or take. Keito merely side stepped him and jumped flipping in the air removing his feet shackles. A sniper trained his riffle at Keito's head the other sniper put his hand on his riffle "your new you havent seen keito fight just watch its worth the entertainment and he'll put his shackles back on." Keito whipped the shackles forward hitting the behemoth in the back of the head. The man turned only to see a flash of grey as Keito dashed forward and slid under him grabbing the giants shackles and pulling his feet out from under him. Keito stood and walked to the mans mid section and sent a strong kick to the ribs which lifted the huge man from the ground he then sent a spinning kick to his side sending him back toward his enturage (sorry cant spell that word) of gaurds knocking them down like bowling pins. Keito grabbed his shackles and put them back on his feet and turned to Seral "have fun at yard time?" Keito said with a smile and the words just passed his lips as the horn sounded to signify the end of yard time.
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Post by Sir Kiken on Oct 8, 2007 9:40:38 GMT -5
"Are you stupid!? You do NOT speak that way to a guard at Mal Prisoner Camp! I'll teach you!" a guard shouted. Seral stared back at him. Keito stood off away from them both. It had been three days since the incident in the yard. The guard brought out a baton. It had something like barbed wire coating it. He pressed a button and electricity cracked around it. The gaurd swung at Seral's shoulder but Seral reached up and grabbed the gaurd's wrist and brought him into a deep knee to the gut. The other guards were out beating a different escapee who Keito had given a fake escape plan to. The gaurd flailed his arm out to try and punch Seral but it was ducked and flopped helplessly agaist the air. Seral got behind the gaurd and put the chain of his shackles around the guard's throat. He tightened the stranglehold until the guards eyes were in the back of his head and there were barely any gagging sounds coming from him. Seral then turned and pulled the guard over his shoulder with the chain throwing him against the ground. The guard lay still. "I knew that guy was dumb enough to try and attack you with no backup. Alright, lets get on with this before they get back." Keito said. The two took the keys from the gaurd and unlocked the opposite cell. They took a knocked out inmate from it and put him and the guard under the ratty covers of their beds. They sprinted toward the door and hid on the sides. "How in the world did they not see us with the cameras?" Seral asked "If there's a beating going on the watchers don't pay attention to the inmates. They already know everyone will be in an uproar. Indeed, all of the other prisoners either shouted that they were escaping, pleaded to be released, or shouted cheers of encouragement. In the end it all mixed to sound like a giant monotone roar. Suddenly the double doors burst open covering the two escaping prisoners. A prince toppled from his kingdom and a prisoner for reasons unexplained. All of the guards charged through the threshold and immediately ran to the cells beating on them to quiet the inmates. The moment all the guards passed through, Seral and Keito charged though the doors without touching them as they closed. They sprinted through the next room which was simply a long hallway. It led to the mess hall, which led to another hallway, which led to solitary confinement. Which led to a boiler room. In the boiler room was a ladder that led to a hatch, WHich led to an attic like room, which had weak wall that had fresh air outside them. They couldn't go to the yard since there were constantly guards in that hallway. If all went well they would make it to all their destinations without having to deal with security. If all went well...
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Post by Dirt on Oct 17, 2007 11:16:35 GMT -5
yeah i just cant do anything with it that does justice to the story im afraid if i continued it would sound like a peace of literary dog shit. well actually i know it would so skip my turn.
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Post by Sir Kiken on Oct 17, 2007 11:21:39 GMT -5
yeah i just cant do anything with it that does justice to the story im afraid if i continued it would sound like a peace of literary dog shit. well actually i know it would so skip my turn. Yeah yeah, I just gonna wait. If I take your turn I take your turn but DO try to come up with something since it'll take me a while to continue this as well. I got it all out on my last post and I need you to post so I can continue something fresh.
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Post by Sir Kiken on Nov 9, 2007 11:27:24 GMT -5
"Yeah, so I told the guy he has cheese on his shoe. The dumb mother fucker bends down to see and bangs his head on the table" the two guards burst out laughing,"Yeah and then he says...'That's not cheese!' It was great!" Suddenly two flying kicks took them down. Seral and Keito turned quickly and sprinted for the next door. Just as they reached it Keito pulled Seral into a dark corner, "What the hell!?" Seral shouted. "It's the blind spot of the camera!. Remember to stay low and close tothe wall in the nest room. It's the only room that has audio so we have to be quiet." he said "I know! We went over this a million times! I'm a soldier, I know how to remember game plans!" The two crept into the next room. Three gaurds were beating a prisoner into the corner on the ground. Seral and Keito looked at each other and moved to the other wall. They continued creeping using the screams and hysterical cries of the prisoner as cover. Just as they were passing by and almost to the door the prisoner spotted them and reach out, "OH GOD HELP ME! PLEASE YOU HAVE TO HELP ME!!!!" he screamed at them, "Sonnovabitch!!!" Keito shouted standing and preparing to fight the guards. Seral stood ready as well, "f*cking moron..." Seral said under his breath glaring at the prisoner.
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Post by Dirt on Dec 20, 2007 10:39:35 GMT -5
The three gaurds turned to them one yelled for backup. Keito rolled his eyes. "why do plans never work right? Seral go ahead i got these three you can take care of the next room." Two of the gaurds grinned at the fact that they only had to take on one prisoner. The third with a bandaged nose and busted lip he was one of the gaurds who had a 300 plus lb. prisoner hurled at him by Keito. One guard rushed in and he attempted to grab Keito who merely took his force and flipped him into a wall. The second grabbed a night stick and rushed at Keito who grabbed the end twisted it so the gaurd let go then used the night stick to grab the gaurds arm and twist it behind his back and pop his shoulder from place then he dropped the night stick on the guards head. The third gaurd who was still shaky was radioing frantically for backup. The gaurd then charged Keito tuned grabbing his arm then the back of his uniform leading the gaurd in circles letting go and slamming his already busted up face into a wall. Then Keito took off after Seral. Seral had already reached the solitary confinement room which had to gaurds in it a flying kick took out the first then a spinkick to the face took out the second. He opened the door to the next room. He entered the boiler room and ran to the latter as Keito burst through the door jumping onto the latter and following Seral up. Once in the attic they crashed through the wall and were ontop of the roof by a wall. Keito jumped from the roof landing on the wall and running toward one of the sniper towers which was empty due to the gaurds frantic calls for backup. Seral who didn't understand why Keito hadn't jumped the wall yet was standing on the wall looking at the sheer drop to the rocks down bellow understood and followed Keito. Once in the sniper tower Keito looked for the boat docks finding them he told Seral to go toward the docks on the wall Keito would go make sure all the sniper towers were empty so Seral didn't get shot.
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Post by Sir Kiken on Dec 20, 2007 22:29:37 GMT -5
Seral stealthily makes his way to the boat docks. The commotion inside the prisoner camp was still extremely audible. He saw some guards at the entrance gun down some escaping prisoners then turn and resume battle with those inside. The iron gate slammed shut behind them. Seral bolted to the closest boat and motioned for Keito. He untied the rope that held the boat to shore. Soon the two were on their way across the waves. The watchtower lights scraped the sea's surface searching for the small raft. It would cross right in front of them and then skim behind leaving their hearts temporarily in their throats. Keito could barely contain his excitement on the escape. Seral looked back at the Mal Island Prisoner Camp and raised a middle finger salute,"Good-riddance" he said. Keito did the same. The floated on into the midnight waves. It began to rain which made them all the more invisable.
They slept out of nothing more than total exhaustion. They couldn't count the days they drifted on the endless aquatic mass. Seral constantly dreamt of his father's words of wisdom and encouragement, "My son, men are not to be feared. No matter how powerful, they can bleed, break, and die like all others." "Seral, you will rule when I am gone. If you think you are ready, you aren't quite there yet". He hadn't felt ready, "That's all right child! No one get's it the first time! Steady your strike, swing clean, and don't delay long enough for your opponent's blade to taste your flesh." "This is not just a weapon. Once you draw it, it is your arm." "This is not just a kingdom, not just your home. This land is the soul of this old man. This is your ancestors and one day it will be you." "Are you afraid of the battle? That is natural. That fear...will keep you alive."
Then, the horrifying image of his father's head in the grip of General Geris flashed in his mind. Rage hotter than the most blazing flares of the sun erupted in his mind. He shot up and roared into the night. Keito glanced at him, "No point in screaming at the moon Seral. Luna is a sleeping goddess. She will not hear your prayers if they are maliced..." he said going back to sleep, "Sleeping? Luna is dead." Seral replied,"Besides, I shout not at the moon. When the day comes, that cry will carry my blade." Keito just snorted and went back to sleep.
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