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Post by The Chronic Dragon on Jul 2, 2009 16:57:38 GMT -5
Give me your kudos, tips, criticisms, and requests if you have them.
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Post by Sir Kiken on Jul 4, 2009 17:56:17 GMT -5
As told before I'm not a fan of fanfic, but I decided to glance over this. Perhaps I should read more in depth before I review it which I will do, but one thing did catch my eye. Zephyr. Come on now, you had to have known that one. Everyone knows, my main character is Zephyr. I'm not asking you to change it, just keep an eye out for stuff like that.
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Post by The Chronic Dragon on Jul 4, 2009 22:42:01 GMT -5
I actually forgot about that when I came up with the idea. Though now I remember you saying that and reading it (I dunno I get reallyfocused when writing so it probably never occured to me), but the reason I did that is because Sora, means sky in japanese. Sky/ Wind. Zephyr was the only cool name with wind I could think of. I know you're not asking me to but I could change it if you want, I'm not grasping onto the name.
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Post by pearlbountyhunter on Jul 5, 2009 1:38:17 GMT -5
O.O wow. This was WAY better than anything I could ever DREAM of writing. ........... -.-
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Post by Sir Kiken on Jul 10, 2009 19:44:50 GMT -5
Then stop dreaming and write. I could have said the same thing six years ago. My writing was still:
I ran really fast at him and delivered a super hard punch to his face making him fly back almost a hundred feet before doing a backflip and he landed on his feet smirking and licking the blood from his bottom lip, "Is that the best you've got Link? Haha! You make me laugh! I'm much more powerful than you!"
See, there's been a drastic transformation. Look and C Drag's early stuff compared to newer. Practice really does make perfect. Trust me, by the end of his stories you'll be able to see a significant difference in skill just from beginning to end of one tale.
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Post by The Chronic Dragon on Jul 10, 2009 22:54:11 GMT -5
YES!! So there is a difference. I thought I might have just been imagining it.
Thnx for the words of wisdom, my sister needed to hear that from someone other than me.
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Post by pearlbountyhunter on Jul 14, 2009 19:40:57 GMT -5
Thanks, Sir Kiken
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Post by Sir Kiken on Jul 24, 2009 19:44:13 GMT -5
No prob. man if I don't get internet back soon though my skills will diminish.
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