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Post by Dirt on Oct 9, 2007 22:51:50 GMT -5
Post replies for my stories here
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Post by Sir Kiken on Oct 10, 2007 8:14:47 GMT -5
'EY! Ikusa means war. I know that without looking it up because I have a character named Ikusa Kotsuro. He's about 88% different than yours though. I just thought I'd let you know. I just got finished reading the first one and I'm about to read the second. It's pimp so far.
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Post by Sir Kiken on Oct 10, 2007 8:25:14 GMT -5
Cheetos do you you type with your teeth or something!? I found more misspelled words and run on sentences than characters typed in your posts! Try reading over them while in the modify post screen so you fix some of your mistakes. The story kicks ass but your typing sucks it!
P.S. ...TEA HEE!!!
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Post by Sir Kiken on Oct 10, 2007 9:50:38 GMT -5
Not bad dude! A little better on the f'ups.
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Post by Sir Kiken on Oct 11, 2007 8:46:30 GMT -5
I really like the last one. Shin'en is cool.
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Post by Dirt on Oct 11, 2007 10:14:53 GMT -5
yeah he is based partially on the Spike model charecter plus he has some influence from different people as well but he follows the spike model
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Post by Sir Kiken on Oct 29, 2007 9:55:17 GMT -5
O.K. that pretty good! Get some more posted soon.
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Post by Knight on Oct 31, 2007 11:33:47 GMT -5
dude that betrayel of the apocalypse is awesome."heaven is on the battle feild!" that is so awesome!
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Post by Sir Kiken on Dec 20, 2007 8:56:53 GMT -5
that word is "raze" not "raise". Pretty cool though.
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Post by Knight on Dec 20, 2007 11:11:35 GMT -5
cool stuff
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Post by Knight on Mar 5, 2008 10:03:22 GMT -5
we need more please
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Post by Knight on Mar 27, 2008 9:32:05 GMT -5
dude serioulsy...i am craving to be betrayed by the apocolypse
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Post by Knight on Apr 23, 2008 12:38:24 GMT -5
dude that new one prisoner thing is cool man.....keep it up
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