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Post by Dirt on Sept 27, 2007 22:32:27 GMT -5
so yeah im goin to post a new story in just a bit so feel free to comment on how it sounds and anything u think needs improvement
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Post by Dirt on Sept 27, 2007 23:53:49 GMT -5
"Rusty you fuckin idiot!" "eeh?" "wake the f*ck up!" "eeh?" "were gonna be late again!" "eeh?" "just get the f*ck up!" "eh?" Rusty rolled out of bed his short brown hair stuck up in odd spikes everywhere his bright grey blue eyes cloudy with sleep. "get dressed you moron!" Rusy walked over to a table where his clothes lay folded rather hap-hazardly. he was slightly more coherent now and realized he was standing in the middle of his hotel room in nothing but white boxers. he began to get dressed rather slowly and at his own pace when Takemoto burst into the room "Damnit! Rusty can you go any slower I've veen yelling at you for 25 minutes hurry the f*ck up!" Rusty suddenly realized what he was late for and got dressed immediately. only five minutes later Rusty and Takemoto came running out of the hotel "why didnt you wake me up sooner?" "I tried you just are a really heavy sleeper i cant believe were gonna be late again because of you!" "relax were not gonna be late" "yes we fuckin are cause your dumbass doesnt know how to wake up" Takemoto was a little shorter than Rusty at only 5'6'' while Rusty was 5'8'' but you sure couldnt tell since Takemoto was jumping around in a crazed frnzy. "ok fine im sorry now can we please hurry?" the two ran down the hill from the hotel toward the town.
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Post by Sir Kiken on Sept 28, 2007 8:01:21 GMT -5
good good
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Post by Korin on Sept 28, 2007 8:02:29 GMT -5
Si senor
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Post by Dirt on Oct 5, 2007 22:10:18 GMT -5
The owner of the bar sat quitely at the counter. The bar was empty except for the loyal dregs who never seemded to leave. The door swung open and the mail courier strode in "I got the new bounty list for ya Earl." "well thanks I'll pt it up in a sec. Say ya want a beer?" "no thanks Earl I got alot to deliver." The mail courier tapped his sack of parcels and letters and then strode out on his marry way. No sooner did the courier leave then Takemoto and Rusty burst in the front door. "Aw Rusty, Takemoto you scared the hell out of me." "sorry Earl. hey is the new bounty list here yet?" "It's right here Rusty I was just about to put it up." Earl reached and put it up Rusty and Takemoto looked on in anticipation. The first name read Rusty boutny 100,000 the second Takemoto 75,000 the tow of the stared mouths agape. "I can't belive we're bounty heads we're supposed to be bounty hunters." "I can't believe your bounty is bigger than mine!" Rusty looked at Takemoto in disbelief. "Is that really important now?" Takemoto stared daggers at Rusty. "come on I mean really I just can't believe it Rusty I'm the one who caures the most trouble I nean who blew up that tavern, destroyed half of that hotel, and who punched Earl in the face so we could get away. I DID!!!" Rusty looked at Takemoto puzzled then Takemoto sent a screaming right hook into Earl's face then bolted out the door. "shit what an idiot. Sorry Earl." Rusty dashed out after Takemoto.
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Post by Dirt on Oct 17, 2007 10:50:56 GMT -5
The two companions ran up the hill toward the hotel. "Takemoto you didnt have to hit him." "oh contrere my dear Rusty i did have to hit him you see he was going to turn us in." "No he wasnt you knuckle head now we're going to have to fight our way out of this village because Earl has probably called the cops by now. good going Takemoto you got us kicked out of yet another village." "I know and you still have a larger bounty than me that is total BULL SHIT! I mean i cause all the trouble and get none of the credit." The two reached the hotel the police were already outside. "this is going to be fun." said Rusty with a sarcastic grin.
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Post by Dirt on Oct 25, 2007 12:32:17 GMT -5
"Hell yeah it is" Takemoto said as he ran forward. "Takemoto wait!" but it was to late Rusty let out a sigh "oh well i better go help him." Rusty raced after Takemoto who had already reached the officers and sent a flying kick into one's head. Rusty soon followed with a knee to the head of a downed officer. "please just dont get back up." Takemoto was already up the stairs and to there room where he began furiously collecting the two's things and throwing them violently into a suitcase. "well Rusty time to go!" with that Takemoto jumped out the third story window. He hit the groud with a loud thud. Rusty looked out the window at Takemoto who was on the ground holding his knee. "Damnit that hurt aw f*ck!!! why did i do that?" Rusty smiled and turned to the door way which was filled by five police officers. Rusty reached for his sword when one of the officers pulled a gun out. "don't move!" Rusty raised his hands. "alright alright ya got me." while he said this he was slowly backing up until he bumped into the wall. "i was going to use the door buuuut." with that he turned and quickly hit the wall with a spining kick splintering it into many pieces he jumped from the wall hiting the ground and rolling. "come on Takemoto get off your ass." Takemoto immediately stopped craddling his wounded leg and bound off after Rusty the police stood at the window and fired shots of in vain.
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