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Post by Sir Kiken on Sept 24, 2007 10:38:36 GMT -5
This is where you go if you've got writer's block or you have an idea you can't really use and would like to see what someone does with it.
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Post by stjulez on Oct 12, 2007 18:22:09 GMT -5
Okay, so I'm writing a story where every other chapter is written by one of the two main characters points of veiw. That might sound a little confusing.... Like....Matt and Erik are the two. Chapter one is Matt's journal, chapter two is third person POV from Erik's side of the story. I entered the main story characters into the story and I don't know if I should move to the third chapter from Matt's journal, or go to their first class in the 3rd preson POV, continuing chapter two. What do you guys think? Does that make sence, or should I post what I have so far?
Suggestions?
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Post by Sir Kiken on Oct 13, 2007 0:10:27 GMT -5
I advise you to post what you have so far. I do somewhat understand what you're saying but I'd like to see it more than hear about it. Don't worry, if you don't like it I can remove it until further notice or modify it for you.
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Post by stjulez on Oct 13, 2007 11:57:19 GMT -5
Okay! Thanks! I'll work on posting it now!
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Post by Sir Kiken on Oct 22, 2007 8:11:02 GMT -5
So I gots new idea right, but I already have three stories in work. I got the idea helpin my bud work on his new idea widget. It gots a new humanoid race thing in it and thereis a bunch of discrimination type stuffs. It supposed to be pretty dramatic and have a lotta action. Only thing is I don't know if I should start postin once I get it worked out or wait, and if I do post it what should I suspend?
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Post by pisstianfury on Jan 30, 2008 15:37:26 GMT -5
okay...im writing more of an "adult" story......like it has sex as the opening chapter....because I suck at writing ^_^ hehe.....well.....I want it to be more of an adult adventure story....is three chapters of sex too long? (im not joking) but Im making it really detailed...I also need to ask Sir Kiken.......is it okay if I use the name Rey.....like...not a main character....just a little side quest guide guy.
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Post by Sir Kiken on Jan 30, 2008 21:05:01 GMT -5
You can have the character but three chapters is way to much for an x-rated scene. WAY too much! Even one chapter is a little much. I don't care if it'd got some 'adult content' but you're trying to go over board. I'm warning you now, If you go over the top I will delete your stuff and possibly suspend you. Only because I'm sure you know about where to stop.
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Post by pisstianfury on Feb 7, 2008 15:22:24 GMT -5
alright then. I'll still right it how I am but Ill up-rate it so its acceptable to your standards..is that cool?
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Post by Sir Kiken on Feb 11, 2008 22:07:52 GMT -5
What do you mean "up-rate"? you better not be trying to say you're just going to post it anyway?
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Post by pisstianfury on Feb 19, 2008 16:15:12 GMT -5
no i was going to just leave the sex scene out but I just said to hell with it and im not doing it now
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Post by Sir Kiken on Mar 5, 2008 11:51:38 GMT -5
might make Reality broken again.
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Post by pisstianfury on Mar 5, 2008 15:15:10 GMT -5
FUCKIN DO IT! hell yeah! but make cloud less....future emo kid O.o
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Post by Sir Kiken on Mar 5, 2008 18:27:41 GMT -5
I'm gonna redo the whole damn thing. I need to change the names definately. Here are the one's changed so far, Zero: No change (Zero-Ray Rivex) Cloud:REMOVED Christian: Ikaru-Okoru Shenkide Kurama: Kenshi-Faru Hitoki Sephiroth: Akuto Merik: Mamimaru Titus: Tsuyoi-Zen Rivex Omagus: Victus-Omegus Excessum Angel: Mitsukai-Kajin Joseibi Kaia: No change (Kaia-Yufuu Towe) Raye: Raye(Ray-Ya)-Aoao Nitaki Sara: REMOVED Reaper: Wraith Kadeus: No change Artemis: Kuo-Mishima Dao Gemini: Valus Towe-sensei: No change
There we go. That's what I got so far. Any help would be greatly appreciated for the names.
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Post by Knight on Mar 6, 2008 10:00:34 GMT -5
Kenshi-Faru.......NICE......sara and reaper is tough cuz i don't remember them but i might feel stupid once you tell who they were.......reaper to elite or tetra or wraith.........sara to kana
just spittin' stuff out alright
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Post by pisstianfury on Mar 6, 2008 15:46:25 GMT -5
cloud could be changed to baby rapin fat emo b*tch boy
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Post by pisstianfury on Mar 6, 2008 15:47:05 GMT -5
but I have to admit I do like the whole Ikaru-Okoru Shenkide it has a nice ring to it
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Post by Sir Kiken on Mar 6, 2008 17:26:30 GMT -5
Ikaru means "hot-temper"
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Post by Knight on Mar 7, 2008 14:18:20 GMT -5
YES!! that is funny......describing pisstian in a cool way......lol
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Post by pisstianfury on Mar 7, 2008 15:25:32 GMT -5
well well........I see how it is....haha ....HEY! Ive gotten better now that I have accepted jesus christ as my savior *CHEESE*
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Post by Sir Kiken on Mar 7, 2008 22:19:04 GMT -5
You mean * ;D*
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